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[雪泥]

You My Dream
By W•E•SHOCK(USA)

My mind floats
Toward the stars
My hand floats
Over a breast

The hunger is intense
For you
This not a loving
Issue

Thinking is numbed
At this point
Do I advance in my
Touching anew

Do I continue to push forward
With this hand
Waiting for a signal on what
Next to do

The rest of me is still floating
In a dream
Yet all senses
Are very very keen

Sight, sound, smell
In abundance

My body shaking as I kiss
Tender lips

Oh I want you, oh I want you
This is for sure
And why not
Everything is just right
This night

But what is that sound I hear
A ringing in my ear

Now coming a feeling of fear
That you will quickly disappear
For you are so loving and sincere

But yet something is wrong
The feel is gone
You are becoming a blur

I want to hold a second more
A rush impowers
I want to explore

Now half awake
I sigh and shake

Just another sticky dream toward
You
Rise I must now do
Then go off to school

I look to the floor
Your face and body part
Looking back at me
Now I think
Now I see

A right kick
Magazine in hide
With one quick slide

Now to school
I head

A loving you
Under the bed

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点评：此诗后半部分有瑕疵，在‘Now half awake‘前都写得不错，有古韵