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[海外逸士]

暮雨瀟瀟江上村﹐綠林豪客夜知聞。
他時不用相迴避﹐世上於今半是君。

Lodging at Jinglansha & Meeting Nocturnal Visitors
by Li She of Tang Dynasty

Evening rains patter in the village at the river;
Brave men of green woods visit me at night.
Don’t shun each other if meeting again in future,
As half of people nowadays are of your nature.

[周昕]

[howard2005]

No need to avoid each other if we meet again in the future
As half population in this world nowadays are of your nature

译得好，音韵和谐。

[海外逸士]

at the river？ --> by the river
兩個介詞都可用。by the window, at the window.

in future？ --> in the future
詩尚簡潔。寫譯詩﹐特別譯詩﹐不一定要像寫文章一樣﹐用完整的語法。

half population in this world
太纍贅。既說PEOPLE﹐當然在世上的。其義自涵。

翻譯另一原則是要雙向考慮﹐考慮英文的可讀性。忠實翻譯及雙向考慮﹐要同時並
進。

[短平快]

Half the people in the world love the other half,
half the people hate the other half.
Must I because of this half and that half go wandering
and changing ceaselessly like rain in its cycle,


http://www.poemhunter.com/poem/half-the-people-in-the-world/

[周昕]

让您费心，冒昧之处，还请海涵。