海外逸士
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加入时间: 2005/11/08 文章: 1956 来自: America 积分: 10755
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If a poetic line is too long, it won't read like a poem. So better cut lines short. My tutor told me, when I finished a poem, read it at least ten times and listen if it sounded like a poem. How can you get the ability to decide if it is a poem or not? You must read a lot of poems by famous poets. Then you can write better poems.
I gave the advice my tutor had given me when I learned to write poems.
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