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[william zhou周道模]

我说的星星


说起星星

你内心就开始仰望

你就迷惑那些神秘的命运

说起星星

我就同情落水的星光

我看见这些落难的姊妹

虚弱的泪光在呻吟……


The Stars I Mentioned


Talking about the stars

Your heart starts to look up

at those mysterious fates

Talking about the stars

I'm pitying the star light in the water

I see these suffering sisters

Whose weak sight in tears is moaning

[william zhou周道模]

自改一次，大家再批。

[非马]

随手改动了几个字,供你参考而已. 祝新年快乐!

Talking about the stars

Your heart starts to look up

at those mysterious fates

Talking about the stars
..........

[william zhou周道模]

谢谢非马老师的点拨，我原来用的就是 talking，后又该错了，再改过来。