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年底大清洗

岁月是一条河，
河里缤纷的记忆
流淌。

随年岁的递增与沉淀，
心底的记忆之河渐变
浑沌。

年底，且来一场
大清洗；
清洗的过程加入一些
漂白剂——

哪怕一切
荡然无痕，
包括
你。


A Cleaning at The End of A Year

Wr./Tr. By Yuanmei

Years is a river
Where myriads of memories
Flow.

As the years passed or settled,
The river of memories in my heart
Became addled.

At the end of the year
An entire cleaning I would do,
And some bleacher
Would be put into –

Even if all
Would be cleaned out,
Including
You.

[william zhou周道模]

读了，学习了。

个人看法：“岁月是河”不够新，应尽量求新，新的发现、创造。