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[诗童]

那么多花 so many flowers



那么多花在诗歌里盛开 so many flowers blooming in poems

它们说：过好每一天 they say improve every day

醒着，芬芳世界 awake to perfume the world

那么多花有那么多遭遇 so many flowers with so many misfortunes

那么多花被流水 so many flowers taken into the dark sleep

载入深色的睡眠 by running water

[陈德根]

学习了！

[诗童]

欢迎老师们指正。

[海外逸士]

say improve, wrong. can't use two verbs in one sentence.

[非马]

they say: improve every day 这样就没问题了。

"遭遇"不一定是“不幸”（misfortune);译成 encounter可能较好。

[howard2005]

那么多花在诗歌里盛开
它们说：过好每一天
醒着，芬芳世界
那么多花有那么多遭遇
那么多花被流水
载入深色的睡眠

so many flowers bloom in poetry
they say they cherish each day
awake to scent the world
so many flowers experience so much
taken by the flowing water
into the darkcolored sleep