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[非马]

有希望的早晨

不管天气预报员怎么说
这是个有希望的早晨

我已经看到
此呼彼应的尖锐鸟鸣
在漆黑的天空上
划出一道道
长长短短粗粗细细的弧线
透露天光


DAYBREAK

I don’t care what the weatherman says
it’s going to be a fine day

Already I can see far and near
birdcalls rise
and prick the dark sky
making slits
to let light in



A PROMISING MORNING

I don’t care what the weatherman says
this is a promising morning

here and there
I see piercing birdcalls
making slits
long and short, wide and narrow
on the black sky
to let the light in

[howard2005]

A Promising Morning

No matter what the weatherman says,
I feel this is a promising morning.

In my sight,
sharp birdcalls echo each other
and rip the black sky
with various slits
to let daylight in.

[苑眉]

好些时间不来，也好些时间不写诗了，非马老师还是很能写啊，赶不上了。。。

问好非马老师！

看了老师7、8月发的几首，最喜欢的是这首，诗后面用的通感吧，感觉那还真是个有希望的早晨，尽管未必真的看到。。。

一英读起来比较爽口。。。