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[Kisses][亲吻]
英汉版为冯文淑------桑林原创 英文版作于今天

O how consummant is the earth in sleeps, beloved earth ，

I want to kiss spring light on　red lipp of earth，　

And to steal smile from red lipp of earth，

　
O how sweet is the earth in asleep, beloved earth ，

Wind return'd from death to kissed land-------beauty spirit in beauty spirits，

The lips of eastern__dawn dew_drop press.



[亲吻]
我最可爱的土地的睡眠多美啊,
我要亲吻土地的红唇上的春光,
趁此机会窃走土地红唇上的微笑,

我最可爱的土地的睡眠多美啊,
复活的风儿亲吻着土地--------这美神中的美神,
露珠亲吻着东方的曙光,


请各位老师多多批评,指正初学者桑林

[海外逸士]

能否把英文先排排整齊﹖謝謝。

[冯文淑--------桑林]

David Darbyshire (3/2/2006 3:07:00 AM)
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh nice SC love from dave xxx

见http://www.poemhunter.com/p/m/poem.asp?poet=94581&poem=2684562&show=comments&page=1&num=0&r=0.5613977

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Lawrence S. Pertillar (3/2/2006 3:19:00 AM)
March! Spring! The gentle Lion discovering his surroundings...smiling! 'Pansy' is a very well done haiku! Picturesque, charming...rememberable! Very nice!