[雅思]作文真题剖析

  剑桥中的考试真题,相信大家都已经非常熟悉了。我们就一起结合此题,对双边结构的整体文章结构和遣词造句做一个简单的对比。
  1.引言段引言段是通篇作文的开篇之作,对于它的写法多种多样。但是无论怎样书写,切忌出现以下模式性的语句样式:
  模板语言:
  Nowadays, the discussion about ……is a very controversial one. Those who criticize……. argue that……, but people who advocate……, on the other hand, maintain that……这样的模板相信大家不会陌生,它曾经受到无数考生的青睐。但是我们说过,这样过于机械的语言,很难体现出考生对考题文字的理解,更为糟糕的是,你的开头有可能和无数人是重复的下面我们就做一个简单的对比:
  非模板语言:
  No matter in which country, children are, without any exception, regarded as the protected in society, not to mention making them involved in any forms of paid-work(调用背景知识,引出话题).The necessity of allowing them to make money with their own hands is indeed worth discussing(结合对考题文字的统一转换,自然流露双边讨论倾向。