[雅思]作文真题剖析
剑桥中的考试真题,相信大家都已经非常熟悉了。我们就一起结合此题,对双边结构的整体文章结构和遣词造句做一个简单的对比。
1.引言段引言段是通篇作文的开篇之作,对于它的写法多种多样。但是无论怎样书写,切忌出现以下模式性的语句样式:
模板语言:
Nowadays, the discussion about ……is a
very controversial one. Those who
criticize……. argue that……, but people
who advocate……, on the other hand,
maintain
that……这样的模板相信大家不会陌生,它曾经受到无数考生的青睐。但是我们说过,这样过于机械的语言,很难体现出考生对考题文字的理解,更为糟糕的是,你的开头有可能和无数人是重复的下面我们就做一个简单的对比:
非模板语言:
No matter in which country, children
are, without any exception, regarded as
the protected in society, not to mention
making them involved in any forms of
paid-work(调用背景知识,引出话题).The necessity of
allowing them to make money with their
own hands is indeed worth
discussing(结合对考题文字的统一转换,自然流露双边讨论倾向。
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