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[半溪明月]

《守夜》


月光小于睡眠河水穿过我们的房间家具在哪儿靠岸
不仅是编年史也包括非法的气候中公认的一面
使我们接近雨林哦哭泣的防线玻璃镇纸读出
文字叙述中的伤口多少黑山挡住了
１９４９年在无名小调的尽头花握紧拳头叫喊


北岛这首语言独特，我也很喜欢．山城子老师对一些词的修辞做了详细分析归纳，学生受益非浅．《守夜》是守１９４９年新中国的成立前的夜，等待登上黎明的岸，历史会记下这一天。那些枪林弹雨中牺牲了的英雄们，诗人的文字在为他们哭泣，希望的花朵在磨拳擦掌，呐喊太阳从东方冉冉升起～诗人在“黑山”压境，黎明前的更黑暗的夜下，只能用这种隐晦的笔调来抒发迎接新中国的不眠心情。

山城子谢谢明月又来阅读这篇文！

[山城子]

中尉在《我的<风花雪夜情>》帖后留评：

重读山城子老师的《我的<风花雪夜情>》，不仅感受到一种厚重的文化底蕴，更是体悟到浓郁的亲情、师生情和爱国情。
向您表达深深的敬意！

山城子深表谢意！

[山城子]

半溪明月读山城子《田园篇》简评：

读这些诗歌能感受到山城子老师热爱生活，不断用诗人的眼光观察着生活中的诗情画意，有桃源明躲进小笼成一统的悠然心境，也有对现实中的一些感伤，由景引发的孤独感～

[山城子]

寸草晨露简评《情引并蒂莲》

背靠背也认准同一个方向

----难得的佳句

山城子谢谢晨露的鼓励！

[山城子]

谢谢澳洲彩虹鹦驻站作家 谢流石先生的简评：


百合 初绽在山间
就是一件无法割舍的美丽
淡淡洁白的属性
总在我心 穴居

---欣赏　清新自然　简洁优美
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[何燕子]

拙燕来拜读各位仙家仙言，学习山城子老师厚重的知识内涵，谦逊的交流姿态，广博的知识层面，还有老师勤奋的评文及创作......燕子拜学！

[山城子]

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