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墨人钢
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加入时间: 2005/11/07 文章: 11
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morengang: a chinese poet of "Namely Ism".was born in 1978.
my address:Morengang ;Drug rehabilitation center of "Wu Dong railway",Wuhan shi ,Hubei Province,China. 430084
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write by:morengang(chinese)
if a humanbeing comes to the skyline,he will be a short
he'll be a short ,all his life,rose himself no
so ,all food he ate has been wasted
After all these years,we rose ourselves no,too
so,all food we ate have been wasted
After all these years,they rose theirselves no,too
so,all food they ate have been wasted _________________ 墨人钢
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雪泥
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加入时间: 2005/11/22 文章: 1422 来自: 西欧 积分: 8678
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it is intresting but very different, short with catchy lines, though the writing style is quite new to me... _________________ 雪泥作品http://vip.book.sina.com.cn/book/index_73301.html |
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海外逸士
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加入时间: 2005/11/08 文章: 1956 来自: America 积分: 10755
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雪泥
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加入时间: 2005/11/22 文章: 1422 来自: 西欧 积分: 8678
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海外逸士 写道: |
it's not like a poem. |
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