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When Love was Born

Sarah Teasdale

When Love was born I think he lay
Right warm on Venus' breast,
And whiles he smiled and whiles would play
And whiles would take his rest.

But always, folded out of sight,
The wings were growing strong
That were to bear him off in flight
Erelong, erelong.


当爱情萌生时

作者：莎拉·蒂斯代尔
翻译：苑眉

当爱情萌生时，我想他卧于
维纳斯胸口之上甚为惬意，
时而微笑时而嬉戏
时而小作休憩。

却总隐于视线之外，
羽翼渐渐强壮，
很快，很快，
将载着他翱翔。

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