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[苑眉]

In the Train

Sarah Teasdale

Fields beneath a quilt of snow
From which the rocks and stubble sleep,
And in the west a shy white star
That shivers as it wakes from deep.

The restless rumble of the train,
The drowsy people in the car,
Steel blue twilight in the world,
And in my heart a timid star.


在火车上

作者：莎拉·蒂斯代尔
翻译：苑眉

原野覆盖雪被，
岩石麦茬酣睡，
西边一羞怯明星
远远哆嗦着醒来。

火车无休的轰隆，
车里昏睡的人们，
世上铁青的黎明，
和我心底怯怯的星。

[巫逖]

旅途抒怀，极好的翻译之作。谢谢。

[苑眉]

这首感觉不太好翻译啊。。。头疼呢！