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踏水车

千山万水
路
只有面前这一条

终于
血气方刚的少年
耐不住寂寞
使性狂奔了起来

内疚拖累的父亲
只好叹口气
踉跄跟上



TREADING A WATER WHEEL


thousands of mountains and rivers
yet this is the only road
endlessly lying before him

finally the youth begins
to lose his temper
and starts running wild

feeling responsible
the father utters a sigh
and hurries along

Published in Poetry International (Issue 10, 2006)

[赵福治]

欣赏中文部分.

[云樵]

[林芳萍]

也可以这样理解：你看，已提起流向渠沟的水，不正是血气方刚的少年，欢跃奔腾向前；尚在车节箱中被提的水，一如老父亲，正气喘吁吁地一节一节往上赶。
拟人化手法，形象生动！