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[william zhou周道模]

羊与草

草：我代表大地欢迎雨……

羊：我代表草感谢春风……

The grass says, “ I greet rain in the name of the ground”.

The goat says, “In the name of the grass I thank spring wind”.

[巫逖]

很有创新！

[william zhou周道模]

谢巫老的鼓励！

[非马]

道模好!

Grass says, “ I greet the rain in the name of the earth”.
A goat says, “I thank the spring breeze in the name of the grass”.

or

Grass says, “ In the name of the earth I greet the rain ”.
A goat says, “In the name of the grass I thank the spring breeze ”.

是否较少些翻译的痕迹?

[william zhou周道模]

近日上不了网，今日才上来。

谢谢非马老师！您给的英语句子才地道啊！

[howard2005]

学习中……

The grass says, "I salute the rain on behalf of the earth."
The goat says, "I thank the spring breeze on behalf of the grass."

[william zhou周道模]

谢谢howard君的读评和指教！